Monday, 27 June 2016

first game



On a chilly Friday we road the navy blue bus to st.patricks school to play netball.we started to play.as eager players Shoot,the tall hoop catches the ball.A big grin spread across everybody's face were so thrilled to score.We finally reached the end of the game, we had lost but it was still an exciting game because we had scored twice.I was so proud that we gave it a go.we all trotted back to the bus and drove all the way back to school.

4 comments:

  1. The best description ever love the middle sentence

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  2. OMG OMG I completely LOVED it!!

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  3. I love the words you choose my favourite sentence was "a big grin spead across everybody's faces"
    I love it

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  4. Thanks Emily I think your writing is just as good

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